in the spur of the moment

Posted on Tuesday, 31 December 2013 @ 07:41 < 0End(S) >

Was reading a friend's fanfic, she's not really that of a professional writer, but I was so impressed by how much effort she putted in no matter how not-so-perfect her writing style is. That made me feel like writing a fanfic myself. Well, not exactly a fanfic. Just a story I'm making up myself. SO HERE I GO!

I may not be that good in English, in fact MY ENGLISH SUCKS TO THE EXTENT MY ENGLISH TEACHER COULD PUKE. JUST KIDDING. Enjoy!

Chapter 1
It all started when there was a huge sale in the fish market & crowds consisting of mothers & young boys were around the fish stall. She was squeezing through the crowds, also with the same goal as everybody else. It was so cramped, she couldn't breathe among this 'ocean' of bustling people. Bodies were sticked to each other, and the smell of sticky sweat went through her nostrils. She started feeling dizzy and her consciousness began to drift away. Her body slowly descended to the ground.

Her eyes closed heavily but then they were fluttered open when she felt the arms of a man around her.

"Are you okay, miss? Miss? Please get a hold of yourself, Miss!" She was startled when a handsome face filled her vision. She found herself staring into the bright crimson eyes accompanied by eyebrows that joint together, showing worry.

"Ah ah, yes I'm fine! I'm s-s-sorry, sorry,sorry! I'm sorry f-for troubling you um!" she quickly set her feet on ground, dust her dress. There was a twinge of blush on her face. She has never made that kind of physical contact with a male. The tall guy kept quiet...then burst into laughter.

"What are you apologising so much? Its okay, as long as you're fine .You know you're cute when you're stumbling, Miss. Do you stumble like that with others? Haha!"

Her cheeks went beetroot red. "S-s-shut up!" How rude and embarrassing! To tease an insecure girl like that! she thought. She huffed and puffed as she marched off. "HEY MISS!" She was startled by him calling her, but due to her overwhelming feeling of embarrassment, she just ignored his calls. He sighed.

"Ish, how could she march off like that, forgetting her fallen handkerchief? What an idiot," he muttered.


Done! I know it's short, but I'll continue when I have time to spare! :) ITS MY FIRST TIME WRITING A STORY OKAY I AINT PROFESSIONAL OK! Goodnight and I wish everyone a wonderful new year ahead! 2013 may be a year of lessons, mistakes, tears, and laughter. So let's make a 2014 a greater year! Chao! x


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